If this essay is boring, you can blame it on my parents. They were inconsiderate. Some people do skydiving or axe-throwing, but all I got was basketball. My dad has played basketball his entire life. He played for a season in college and for my whole life he has played at the YMCA or at the park. While we don’t play together much anymore, we have probably played a thousand games together over my lifetime.
There is a picture of me in our family photo album. I am in the playroom of our old house and I am shooting a little rubber basketball into a three-foot plastic hoop. According to my parents, I was about one in the photo, and I had just started playing basketball.
There is another photo, this one from my grandparents house in New York. I am 3 years old holding a basketball and wearing a green jersey and matching shorts. By this point, I was completely obsessed. I read basketball books, I watched basketball on TV, and I wore exclusively basketball clothes. Whenever we went on vacation, finding a basketball hoop was my number one priority. If our destination didn’t have a hoop, I would improvise. I have a vague memory of going to the crayola factory and getting scolded for grabbing handfuls of crayons, walking away, and trying to toss them back into the bins from afar.
I remember hitting my first shot on a 10ft hoop, I can recall highlights and lowlights of games going back 10 years, I remember going to my first NBA game, I remember having basketball birthday parties at the YMCA, I remember father-son basketball camp, and I have so many memories of playing at the park with friends.
I started out playing YMCA and park district basketball. These teams were full of my friends and often coached by my dad. Around fourth grade, I played on my first AAU team, which practiced at the U of I facility and was occasionally visited by the U of I coach. I missed the beginning of my fourth grade season with a broken finger (I broke it at practice the day before our first game). In sixth grade, after breaking another finger the summer prior, I joined another AAU team (while still playing on the first one, simultaneously). For both teams we played in tournaments in Bloomington, Chicago, and St. Louis. I have great memories of staying in hotels and going to Buffalo Wild Wings after games.
Since seventh grade, I have played for my school team every year. My subbie season started off well, but I missed most of the season with a concussion and a broken finger. Freshman year was uneventful and Sophomore year was just practices and scrimmage. I can’t wait for this season – I think we have the potential to be really good.
I have so many more basketball memories: Putting bags over my ball to improve my ball-handling, writing plays for 3 on 3 tournaments, and spending hours reading about basketball shoes. I still watch NBA youtube videos and play 2K. I have three nerf hoops in my room and most days after school I shoot around at the park.
Certainly part of the reason I love basketball is my dad, but I don’t feel like I was forced into it. I’ve played football, soccer, and baseball as well, but basketball is what stuck. I also play tennis, but my life is pretty boring so I’ll stretch that into another essay.
One would think that after playing for so long I would be good at basketball. One would think. Despite likely not playing in college, I don’t regret any of the time I have spent playing basketball. It has provided friends, exercise, and competition. But most importantly, I love to play. I would revise this essay more, but I have to get some shots up before my CS quiz.
I thought you had a really good, humorous hook that made me want to read more about what the essay was about. The way its written almost makes it seems like I'm hearing a conversation, like with how you mentioned you needed to go do your homework in the end. Also, there was a change in viewpoints as you started out saying that basketball was boring, but gradually revealing your increasing interest about it. One thing that stood out to me was that you didn't follow the traditional format of writing one long story to base your reflection on, but several anecdotes and experiences. On the note of reflection though, I think you should increase the length of your reflection section a bit more. Other than that, good job.
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